Quote from: MoominDave on Feb 28, 2017, 06:36AMSong of Solomon 8 text
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1) V4 is repeated from earlier in the book:
"I adjure you, O daughters of Jerusalem,
that you not stir up or awaken love
until it pleases."
I still don't feel that I really understand what it means or why the writer felt it a useful sentiment to add in the several places it is repeated in this book.
I'm not sure either, but it seems to be saying that you should keep love for the right time, so I'm changing "pleases" to "appropriate" to make sense of it. But I'd be surprised if that's right
Quote2) To wish that your beloved were "like a brother to me to me who nursed at my mother's breasts!". Bit of a strange sentiment.
I think that in that society public affection between a husband and wife were frowned on, but sibling affection was ok. So she's saying that she wishes that she could kiss him in public without anyone despising her.
Quote3) V5 is cryptic. I don't think it can be intended to be the woman's words, as it talks about her. Perhaps the "Others". But it can't be - the next sentence would make no sense in the mouths of either Others or She:
"Under the apple tree I awakened you.
There your mother was in labor with you;
there she who bore you was in labor."
Are these supposed to be the words of Yahweh? Of her mother? Of her beloved? Of Solomon? This leaves many more puzzles than it answers.
I guess that v5 is either the others speaking, or her being rhetorical. Then she describes her love: how strong and fierce it is, how it can't be quenched and how anyone that thinks it can be bought is despicable.
This seems to be the high point of the chapter for her.
Quote4) Vv 8-9 are an interjection which seems a non sequitur:
"Others
8
We have a little sister,
and she has no breasts.
What shall we do for our sister
on the day when she is spoken for?
9
If she is a wall,
we will build on her a battlement of silver,
but if she is a door,
we will enclose her with boards of cedar."
The metaphors make little sense to me - do they refer to willingness to consider suitors? And why are they asking this question at all? It adds nothing and spoils the poetic flow. V10 on its own I think is the answer to this, although there is no separation in the text between verses 10 and 11:
"She
10
I was a wall,
and my breasts were like towers;
then I was in his eyes
as one who finds peace."
This seems no kind of useful answer to the question. 'I was different to your little sister, and this happened to me, in the most general possible terms.'
What question do you think is being answered? v5? I think we've changed topic from v5 and she/the author is not giving advice on keeping the expression of love to the right time and her response to having done that follows in v10
Quote5) The comparison with Solomon's vineyard is intriguing. Is she comparing her literal vineyard or her own self, metaphorically? And what's this about giving the king most, but also giving some to the keeper? Is this the third party, the beloved?
I think that she is making an analogy between Solomons renting out his vineyard and how she thinks love should be given. Solomon let out his vineyard as a commercial venture with the 1000 going to Solomon and 200 to the keepers, she is not offering her vineyard (ie her love) for money, it is hers to give as she wants.
So this is the same idea as she mentioned in v7, that love is not something that should be bought, anyone who tries should be ridiculed. I guess that this is in a culture where marriages are arranged by a family for economic reasons
Quote6) The male interjection in v13 (reproduced whole in the summary as its purpose is mysterious to me) is puzzling. Is the women the garden-dweller? Who are her companions? Who is talking? Is it Solomon, who has mislaid his bride? Is it the beloved, mourning his loss to Solomon? Puzzle puzzle puzzle...
7) Then what is she urging in the final (cryptic, needless to say) verse? Is she urging her beloved to escape while Solomon calls to her to come? Is she urging him to take her away with him? Is she urging Solomon to come to her quickly?
I think the writer is just leaving us with the impression of the strong love/desire between the 2. He wants to hear her voice and she wants him to come to her quickly.
Quote8) It's interesting that in v11 Solomon has a vineyard at a place dedicated to Ba'al.
it was just a name
Quote9) All in all, this final chapter takes a book whose purpose was already decidedly obscure and wraps it in a veil of mist. The narrative of this chapter is very choppy, and seems to make little sense - it feels most of any parts of this book like a salad of poetic verses, arranged in random order. In trying to deduce meaning from it, I have the uneasy feeling that there was simply no meaning in it as arranged in the first place. Perhaps it has reached us in substantially garbled form?
10) So how do I leave this book? I lean towards the idea that it describes a woman torn between her lover and her king's command to join him; it simply fits the words better to my eyes than reading it as a simple celebration of Solomon's marriage to her, an interpretation which requires a fair degree of skimming over things to make fit. But it doesn't fit any interpretation that I've seen or thought of perfectly. What would I guess? That it was originally a coherent piece of poetry (or poetic tradition) describing said love triangle that became notably garbled in transmission prior to the date of writing down - perhaps multiple competing versions were in currency, and the editor chose to include all available pieces, at the expense of the narrative. What is certain of it is not much, but I don't think one could argue that it shows at least one passionate love between two people, expressed in tender terms. There's beauty and humanity in the text, but it is very flawed.
its not an organised sequential narrative is it. I think its organisation is based around the topics that the writer wanted to discuss. There may be an order the the topics but I can't be sure.
But it leaves lots of questions and its understandable that its not preached on much.
I think the purpose of the book is to give us a poetic story that tells that "true love" and virtue are important and should be valued and respected.